You could have told me I meant nothing
You could have said I was just another girl
You could have yelled at me to leave you alone
But you chose to not say a word
::and it turns out, your silence hurt me the most::
Author notes
i don't know...
A contest entry
- 5 lines 4 me by sunflowerpoet.
425 points, ended February 26, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Oh, that is so sad and so brilliant and so beautiful... The last line was truly amazing, and it brought the whole poem together and did justice to the prompt. Thanks for entering.
Hugz,
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You seemed to have caught heart-ache here without sounding woe is me or cheesy. It sounds like you. I'm really sorry someone treated you like this.
~M~
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wow..this is awesome...really short but just awesome....
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thanks a ton cass.
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gah dont you hate life sometimes? lol i feel kinda sorry for you... but i love you so ill be her
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aww well thank you my dear
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short and to the point i like ths alot and im sorry this happnd
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thanks. i'm sorry for it too. cuz months later i still hang on to it. it SUCKS
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