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Angel Dreams

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Angel Dreams

Silken skin and satin dreams
Hidden feelings as I grin
Blanketed with batten seams
Little dimples on thy chin

Eye lashes are quivering
Silent are feelings of love
Little mind is flowering
Tiny angel, from above

Free from all obscurity
As I lay you down to sleep
Feeling your security
Precious moments I do keep

Love that is so plentiful
It could not be more lovely
Dreams that are adorable
Little one, you're part of me

 

 

 

Author notes

Ae freslighe: (ay fresh lee):

The Ae freslighe is a Celtic form. Each stanza is a quatrain of seven syllables. Lines one and three rhyme with a triple (three syllable) rhyme and two and four use a double (two syllable) rhyme.

x x x x (x x a)
x x x x x (x b)
x x x x (x x a)
x x x x x (x b)


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  • SteveS gold member
    May 13

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    Such a pretty poem. And this form is so interesting. I might add, you find some cool backround images for your poetry. Super.


  • Desire gold member
    February 27, 2008

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    Wowzers!!

    I have not seen this form before and You have Inspired me to try~like the other forms You have penned~
    this entices the quill to dance also the Precious words weaved within the lines~
    tugs at the Heartstrings
    Beautifully created

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Voice~
    Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet One
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • BellaD
    February 27, 2008
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    Lovely poem!

    This form seems rather challenging and you've done it so well.


  • Swan song gold member
    February 26, 2008

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    This was lovely and a very different form. Nice rhyme and not an easy form to get a rhythm out of. Well done


  • penman gold member
    February 26, 2008

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    Excellent

    Oh my what you can do with a form is truly amazing. This was so well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Never Fall in Love
    February 26, 2008

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    SOft and oh-so beautiful
    It's almost as if you could feel the baby sleeping right next to you - instantly reminded me of my little brother


    Never ♥


  • PerVirtuous
    February 25, 2008

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    This is a wonderful and beautiful poem. It acurately reflects your heart, which makes it incredibly dear to me. I don't know enough about the form to say for sure, but it certainly looks great to me!!


  • Emerald Dog
    February 25, 2008

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    Like the baby, it looks so sweet and pretty, was probably fun to produce and yet is formed by complex science! An exquisite poem and thanks for the lesson!


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    February 25, 2008

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    Wonderful job here this is absolutely beautiful.
    I love you and the masterpiece is just a bonus.

    Mistress Passions


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    February 25, 2008

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    A wonderful joy to read and you have to make it complicated as well!
    All the best in the contest

    Love Sue


  • moonbumps silver member
    February 25, 2008

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    Beautiful from top to toe...exquisite form as always and bang on target.
    xxx


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    February 25, 2008

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    What a truly beautiful and wonderful piece of poetry this is!
    This just touches the heart and soul of your reader
    A truly fine and wonderful sharing! Thank you so much for being a part of our contest; we wish you the very best of luck!!!


  • Lexie - gold member
    February 25, 2008
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    Awwwww

    this is a beautiful piece!!!
    like a softly sung lullaby, you amaze me with your gentle heart


  • Pisces Pieces
    February 25, 2008

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    How can you not be completely tranquil and appreciative of life's gifts after reading this?! This picture too, exquisite.

    You have captured the treasured, precious feelings that come from being touched by the presence of such innocence and beauty that radiate from a child, whether a parent or just an admirer of sorts.

    I never know what to say Your poems always leave me with such feelings of awe I think. I feel so...calm...after reading this, it makes you stop and think twice about the things you take for granted, and also makes you forget all of the bad, even if it's just for moments.

    Thank you for that!

    ♥
    Michele


  • cricketjeff gold member
    February 25, 2008

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    Ooooooooooooooooooo
    Lovely, and now I have to do one!
    That may very well be your prettiest poem, and I mean that as a total compliment.
    Tea first then I'll give it a go.


  • StarEyes
    February 25, 2008

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    This verse is precious!! Along with the background and the picture, it has one major AWWWWWWWWWWW... factor to it!! What a great job you did on this one. And this is the first one in this form you have done? You could have fooled me! I love this one!! It is fantastic!!

    Best of luck in this contest!!

    and love

    Nyetta


  • poeticweaver gold member
    February 25, 2008

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    Excellent Flow...

    I really enjoyed this, the picture following your precious words to verses, are amazing. Thanks for sharing teach.. I wish you all the best in this contest! Much love and light.

    -Timothy


    • Amera gold member
      February 25, 2008
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      Thanks Tim,
      This is my first Ae freslighe, alternating double and triple rhymes is harder than I thought.

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