She awaits eternity
beneath his sheets
but deep down she's crying
She doesn't love him
Why must she tease?
And taunt these men
She just wants to be loved
It doesn't matter who
Then one day she sees
a safety pin
It's calling to her
She’s no longer afraid
Blood rushes from her
Ever roughing essence
Her hearts a tattered mess
It's all over now
In her last gasping breathe
She feels her angels kiss
Wrapping her in light
Saving her life
Author notes
Option Two. A poem about how I used to be until the love of my life came and saved me.
A contest entry
- Gravity: Love Poems Of The Saddest Kind by Fey Absinthe.
500 points, ended March 11, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I love you sweetie!
This poem is very intense and it hit me hard. I know that feeling is hard to control, but with time i know you will find that 'special someone' that will make you feel needed and loved.
^.^
Fox
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I love this!!
I can not tell you how much I really appericiate thispoem. I've felt this way many times before as wel!! Thank you for5 sharing this peice of your heart with me!!!!
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Wow,
I'm very glad to know you have such a love in your life that cares enough to take you by the heart, and show you a better way. Thanks for sharing here, nice reading you once again. Peace, Timothy aka poeticweaver~
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