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Across The Miles........

I see them walk, hand-in-hand,
Etching their love on the sand!

A sudden pang i feel
Envy-a malaise difficult to heal!

As the waves of memories sweep by my side
I realise, there is still some more time to bide!

Four long months of a pregnant pause
A battle we fight for love's noble cause!

As i see the sun, blushing red-
Eager to rest in its oceanic bed

I long for the arms that hold me tight
And beacon words that make my days bright!

As the sky reaches out to meet the sea
I wonder when such a union would be for me!

I close my eyes, and feel him near-
Sometimes this distance is too hard to bear!

As the birds back home, flock
i put my melancholy under key and lock!

Extended across the miles, my love may lay!
Yet, migrating hearts, always find a way!

Author notes

i have been in a long distance relationship now for over eight months.....the guy i love is studying away from where i live.....and we have to wait for four months to meet because that is when his semester ends. but i realise i have gained a lot from this equation, a lot of patience, for instance !
and yeah it is as beautiful, perhaps even more, as it was when we were both here

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  • SomeonesToySoldier gold member
    March 4, 2008

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    Thank you for your entry. I know exactly how you feel and can really relate. I really hope yalls relationship works out.