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Twirling in a Hopeless Neverland

Hold loosely,
throw caution away,
stay gone.

True romance.

Give endless hope
control; resist not.
Deviously loved.

Care to dance?

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  • oldphotosonlybringt
    February 25, 2008

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    yet another amazing poem from the one and only
    keep it up doll i am loveing it
    best wishes in the contest..xoxox


    endless


  • luckynsincere
    February 25, 2008

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    The ending was my favorite... made it seem like a forbidden love.. a secret romance. soooo daring and tempting. I loved it!! thanks for sharing!

    Mel


  • XxDesperiaxX
    February 25, 2008
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    hi, not bad, hey, how many points do you need dude.