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Cupcakes & Forgotten Kisses


Cupcakes and forgotten kisses
Paper cuts and rusted stitches

The love in the world is gone today
And soon enough we’ll all decay

Why is everything in this world so fake
I’m weighed down by chains that I need to break

I’m just sitting here watching as the worlds torn apart
How did this happen how did this start

Everyone hates and everyone lies
I can’t express how much I despise

These fake plastic faces
That everyone just embraces

With thick makeup caked on their eyes
I can see right through their lies

It seems to me that nobody cares
That everyone’s full of lies and everlasting despairs

They’re just sitting there watching weighed down by their chains
Just watching and laughing as the world entertains

They don’t even seem to want to find a way to break
Out of their chains to get away from the fake

They just sit there wasting away
Drowning and choking in a dark world of grey

Instead of looking towards the light
They'll just die in pain and fright

As people slowly rip off their fake faces
The lies are gone, and the truth replaces

What the people truly are
Now you can see their true scars

Don’t keep up with the latest obsessions
Just to make a good impression

Because in the end it doesn’t work
And you’ll just be living in a world of hurt

You weren't as cool as your lies made you seem
Because you ran away instead of taking one for the team






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  • moluv10
    February 27, 2008
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    i really like what you've added to this already great piece. keep up the great work!


  • so L O S T in life
    February 27, 2008
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    oooooooooo i like it it is great and very very true


  • Chrissi
    February 25, 2008

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    this is a really good poem! it has emotion and you captured how about 90% of the world is fake and it is awesome about how you can write it like that! i love it nat and awesome write! you get 3 clappys!


  • moluv10
    February 25, 2008

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    I like this!! You definately told the truth on here. you continue to impress me with your writing. Keep it up.


  • I Am Gun
    February 25, 2008
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    Italy I like this! its so true people are fake it sucks

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