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Roughly sandpapered contempt

Maybe my voice is lost in the crowd of mirthless laughter
I can’t live without my soul
My heart has been shattered by atrocities
Can you love me again? Can a broken heart be healed?

No steps on the way to limbo
Riding my own fraight train to misery
The ones I left behind….. abandoned
The ones I abandoned….. gone

Every path to misery
Is a road I have taken
My heart aches for you
When my mind can’t tell me why

I loved you

The days I’ve lived and missed
Are the ones I spent with you
The nights I dreamed of you
The many days
That I slowly lived and pissed away

I left you

When you loved me
My heart never grew old
All I needed was you
I wanted a life with you

I left you,
But I loved you
I loved you

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  • Miss Belligerence
    April 22, 2008

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    this is very sad, filled with regret and longing. emotions came through very clearly. good job
    -gibson


  • JustFallingApart
    February 25, 2008

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    i like it....but just put me in an upsetting mood again cause my boyfriend just broke up with me, but it is a good write, keep writing


  • Faded Echo
    February 25, 2008
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    i like it... makes me feel depressed...