Dance with me
into eternity
Like the moon
and tides
I can't exist
without you
Love is the
endless music
Author notes
pic credit: Dance me to the end of love by, mmenathalie
A contest entry
- PIF.... QUICKIE!! by luckynsincere.
450 points, ended February 25, 2008, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Amazing take on the picture. I've never heard that one before, the similie of the moon and tides. I like it bunches. You've got a very romantic heart. I love your poetry because it expressed the wonders of love so simply that it makes all those who try to complicate it with words seem dumb lol
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Nicely done, simplistic and yet intense. Danced into the heart and soul as love does. Congrats on the cup...
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Congratulations on the shiny baby!
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Precious!!
Beautiful piece penned with Powerful emotions felt also images tug at the Heartstrings~
Wonderful!!
Congratulations on Your HM!
-Throws confetti-
Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo
Keep that quill dancing...
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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this took my breath. it is smooth and passionate! I love that you kept it simple, yet it dove deep into the desire of the image! thanks so much for you sharing this with me
Mel
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Wow! This is awesome. Great poem to go with the picture. VERY romantic *sigh* Good luck in the contest baby
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