As the rose petals drift
among brisk breezes,
hearts flutter,
strumming
a moonlit romance
upon the ivories
of the soul.
Author notes
prompt: picture
pic credit:
Dance me to the end of love
by, mmenathalie
In a list
A contest entry
- PIF.... QUICKIE!! by luckynsincere.
450 points, ended February 25, 2008, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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A love Tango from here to eternity taking lovers by storm, immersing them in waves of passion and hearts fluttering... isn't love grand!!!
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First of all let me congrats on the trophy for you really deserved it with this romantic write. I truly enjoyed every bit of it. Thanks for sharing it with me...
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This is beautiful!! It's amazing how much can be said in a few words and you have captured the essence of this picture.
Just lovely!
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Well, now, no wonder you won the gold one for this. Just a quite lovely take on the pic. Congratulations.
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You have captured not only the love in this image but the yearning. I loved that not only did the rose petal drift with grace, but also your words.
Sincerely,
Mel
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Awwww -melts-
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I can hear the piano in your heart matching the right key for the one you love as you set a etude swirling into his heart.
Love, Tom B.
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Most wonderfully and beautifully written, sweetie! Soft, sensual, and just a gorgeous piece!
Wishing you the very best life has to offer!
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Tis a beauty!
Wow. Great work indeed. Exceptional. Now I wish I hadn't entered...
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This is a really beautiful piece. Reading this poem, I realized how intricately it becomes a part of the prompt. You have gone beyond the simple muse by merging in marriage, song and dance. My mind saw and heard piano keys as two danced, blocking out the world in romantic duet. A lovely piece and I wish you the best in the comp
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Lovely!
I just adore the way your words flow off the tongue while reading!
Beautiful imagery, and such well versed lines divine.
Keep up the great works, shine on sweet soul!
-Timothy
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