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Soul Dancing

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As the rose petals drift
        among brisk breezes,

hearts flutter,

strumming
  a moonlit romance
        upon the ivories
         
                  of the soul.





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prompt: picture

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Dance me to the end of love
by, mmenathalie

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  • Ithica silver member
    April 16, 2008

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    A love Tango from here to eternity taking lovers by storm, immersing them in waves of passion and hearts fluttering... isn't love grand!!!

  • darrylblacksr
    March 5, 2008

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    First of all let me congrats on the trophy for you really deserved it with this romantic write. I truly enjoyed every bit of it. Thanks for sharing it with me...


  • kiwigirljacks
    March 5, 2008

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    This is beautiful!! It's amazing how much can be said in a few words and you have captured the essence of this picture.
    Just lovely!


  • Micro
    March 1, 2008

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    Well, now, no wonder you won the gold one for this. Just a quite lovely take on the pic. Congratulations.


  • luckynsincere Greeters member
    February 25, 2008

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    You have captured not only the love in this image but the yearning. I loved that not only did the rose petal drift with grace, but also your words.

    Sincerely,

    Mel


  • Moons Lunar Angel
    February 25, 2008
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    Awwww -melts-


  • tomisb
    February 25, 2008

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    I can hear the piano in your heart matching the right key for the one you love as you set a etude swirling into his heart.
    Love, Tom B.


  • Heavenly Angel
    February 25, 2008

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    Most wonderfully and beautifully written, sweetie! Soft, sensual, and just a gorgeous piece!
    Wishing you the very best life has to offer!


  • Lady Eventide
    February 25, 2008
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    Tis a beauty!

    Wow. Great work indeed. Exceptional. Now I wish I hadn't entered...


  • In Too Deep1 gold member
    February 25, 2008

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    This is a really beautiful piece. Reading this poem, I realized how intricately it becomes a part of the prompt. You have gone beyond the simple muse by merging in marriage, song and dance. My mind saw and heard piano keys as two danced, blocking out the world in romantic duet. A lovely piece and I wish you the best in the comp


  • poeticweaver silver member
    February 25, 2008

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    Lovely!

    I just adore the way your words flow off the tongue while reading!
    Beautiful imagery, and such well versed lines divine.
    Keep up the great works, shine on sweet soul!

    -Timothy

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