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complimenting me a dawn...

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Oh God

I am absolutely bewildered by you
especially by your identity

whenever I am sinking
whenever I am in the invisibility

I reminisce your surname
and you are manifested like
a constituent of illumination

inculcating in me
the golden sweetness of your fluoresce
complimenting me a dawn

Oh God...

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  • nobodys-girl
    March 21, 2008

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    this is suck a beautiful poem! im glad you have such a great relationship with god. thankyou so much for entering and good luck!


  • Arizona Sunset
    March 17, 2008

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    this is beautiful...and your love for God shines in your work...ty for sharing, best to you in the contest ~blessings always~ Trisha


  • motel silver member
    March 9, 2008

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    "... complimenting me a dawn..."
    this is a truly powerful line. this dawn can occur anytime we reach out beyond ourselves. thank you for your insight.

  • Zyskandar A Jaimot
    March 3, 2008
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    like this line a lot:"I reminisce your surname" good write thanks for sharing regards zaj


  • spiritualangel
    February 29, 2008

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    I reminisce your surname
    and you are manifested like
    a constituent of illumination

    Beautiful. Best of luck.


  • GoingCoastal
    February 27, 2008

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    I am always amazed by the awe-inspired words that you share...Thank you for your depth and passion...


  • stavykm gold member
    February 26, 2008

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    Beautiful

    What great imagery and content to your excellent poem here. You did a great job for the ocntest and I hope you get the gold. I remimisce your surname and you are manifested like a constituent of illumination. Brilliant with the picture!! Just loved this. Thank you for sharing with me my dear friend.
    Wishing you many blessings
    Kelle Marie
    stavykm

  • Liquid memories
    February 25, 2008

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    how small we are as childeren attempting to describe the greatness and love of God. we are nothing in his
    eyes, yet he loves us as his children, which motivate
    us to show love to each other. this earth is our home
    we need to share all of its resources, for none is
    better or any lesser. Oh God, may one day you bless each one living on this earth. f


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    February 25, 2008

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    AMAZING TO KNOW THAT MOST HIGH, THE MOST LOVING, THE MOST POWERFUL IS ALWAYS THERE, CAN ANYTHING ON EARTH COMPARE TO THAT FEELING OF EASE, THIS WEEK-END I NEEDED A MIRACLE AND A VERY BIG ONE INDEED , I PRAYED AND I KNEW, DON'T WORRY FILLED MY THOUGHT OVER AND OVER AGAIN IT BROUGHT SO MUCH PEACE IN TIME THAT SHOULD HAVE BROUGHT GRIEF, AND IT IS MONDAY AND LIFE IS QUITE ON TRACK, THANKS BE TO GOD,THE WORDS IN YOUR POEM ARE MY THOUGHTS, YOU HAVE WRITTEN THEM BEAUTIFULLY. GOD BLESS


  • rhondasail
    February 25, 2008

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    This write reminds me of the 'good thief', Dismas, who while hanging on the cross next to Christ asks, "Jesus, remember me when you come into Your kingdom"..and Jesus repied, "This day, you will be with me in paradise"...thinking of HIM does bring the dawn of new life...Lovely write...brought me deep thoughts...Best of luck in the contest. Peace, Rhonda

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