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Impossibility




Finding reason in chaos is
like catching gusts of wind in a colander.



©2008
2-25-2008




Author notes

I did not realize this was a prompt contest. Sorry if it does not fit.

"Fake feelings of security
drowning
in an incessant spiral of melancholy"

- Chantell [Tattboyspet]
From her poem Hurting


Written for the contest: 10X13X15 Lets go by Friday
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2392989

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  • Elrenia
    February 29, 2008
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    Thank you for your kind words. I hope you enjoy more of my efforts.

    rous

  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    February 25, 2008
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    An interesting idea none the less.


    • Elrenia
      February 25, 2008
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      Thank you. Just my twisted mind at work.

  • Friday gold member
    February 25, 2008

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    It is a curious take and I'm not sure I entirely understand it (in relation to the prompt) but it's certainly something different. Thank you

    • Elrenia
      February 25, 2008
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      I posted the entry before you posted the prompt. I did not realize there would be one. As I put in my notes, sorry if this misses the mark.
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