Driven so deep
pain becomes visible
Misery appears paradox
of false divisions
tangible
Author notes
Prompt::
"Fake feelings of security
drowning
in an incessant spiral of melancholy"
- Chantell [Tattboyspet] From her poem Hurting
A contest entry
- 10X13X15 Lets go by Exodus.
450 points, ended February 25, 2008, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Congrats on the gold Mark
Your words have definitely done the prompt justice and I KNOW that Helen could feel them as well
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congrats on gold brother
your amazeing
love you -
I know exactly how this feels... it makes me feel miserable, I been through this myself. Hope it's not personal. Well done on the Goldie though
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wow this is fantastic and deserved that gold though I hope your really smiling lol
beautiful as always
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No wonder you got gold
Darn it
Never ♥
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See! Congratulations on a well deserved gold. ~Pamela
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Amazing
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Excellent. Absolutely excellent. You are so good at these. Impressive. ~Pamela
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This is just beautiful.
I love the idea of pain being a living thing.
Amazing work
Thank you -
Nice Shot.
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