Winds fights between the silence and the sleeps
Minds delights controls the tyrant and the sheep
Leaves of trees, breathes squeeze
Even the skies got down on its knees
Demon knights want the soul
Angels fight against it all
In a world of dooms
And bloody rooms
Love became loveless
Law became lawless
Fear became fearless
And you still can tell
That this is not hell
And everything’s well
Wake up for the bell
The one inside your shell
For freedom for the spell
Outside this world you must compel
A contest entry
- Imagery by angryelf6886.
350 points, ended April 5, 2008, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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its so raw, so true, magnificent yet a bit blue, but sweety ur ta,ent has grown larger than ever, ur an amazing poet partner.
once we're done from the compliment on the poem, am gonna start bashing u: kess ekht hal chaghle man, waynak, samme3na 7essak sam, enno fi ness mechte2etlak wairrrrrrrrr
yala tc and hope to cu soon,
once again, ur poem rocks
and u
peace partner
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