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Fairy Princess of Sidney

So Beautiful yet so Foul; the bad-tempered bitch on the inside is only being camouflaged by the first-rate Miss America on the outside.
Calm then again Explosive; one barrel of TNT anxious to go off is corked by the cradle of self image.
Steady but Blurred; just like a mirage, you think it's there, but think twice and you know it's not.
Happy but Sad; what a bright and sunny day it is outside. Oh, no, but I hear a storm coming.
Lucid above Delirious; control is the word, but can you handle it?

Above and Underground; all in all, so above it, but underneath it all, way under the influence, that everything is out to get you, chew you up and spit you out.
They look you in the eye and tell you "I care." And "I understand." But where are they when you need them the most? Gone, saying "Sorry, can't help you."

Avoiding to stick out like a sore thumb, you be the actress/actor you've always wanted to be. Just another fake, fit in, stuck up Barbie doll cyclone. But there's always that one doll clone that just so happens to stick out from all the others. No matter how hard they try to stay on the down low with the type of profile they have. One wrong move and they're the talk of the town.

Luckily, to the rescue comes someone who understands you more than anyone. Everyone tells you to relax and do something productive. You never listen, but when hearing it from an apprehensive view, it's all very clear.

No need to feel like a little weed from all the tall flowers. It's all just jealousy, they feel they can never do what you can, come out to the world and show your real self. So they bring you down and make you feel like you did something wrong. So to them you are the ugly duckling just cause you're different, but you're really the radiant swan in a small pond.

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  • deleteduser
    April 9, 2008

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    Give there reason to be that radiant swan. Let God be the light that makes you beautiful and God will give you reason in life. This is a beautiful poem and I am saddened greatly by the people of the world. Filth has abased itself on earth. Search deep and you will find truth.


  • Exodus gold member
    March 10, 2008

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    This felt a little wordy to me.
    But other than that it was certainly interesting
    Thank you


  • emochick014
    February 25, 2008

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    OMG! jerri i love you so much! this poem is amazin! you have no idea how hard its making me think right now, but thats not a bad thing. wows i love it SOOOO much! i love ya