Gothic sombre her mask,
began eating its way in.
The harrowing darkness
of death, like candy to a baby
brought her close to the edge.
Nightmares consumed
lullaby conformity.
In blood riddled dark times….
She found; love, hope and joy
In a list
A contest entry
- Pre-writes & Fresh Writes by LadyUnique.
400 points, ended March 7, 2008, 56 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Illeanna by Ravenblood.
750 points, ended May 15, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Interesting, very interesting. The ending was unexpected but still good.
Thanks for entering and I'm so very sorry it took months for this contest to close. (I'm somewhat patient)
Claire-Anne -
the ending surprised me. i think it was pretty clever
this gets better with each read and i've read it four times so far 
i'm putting this in the finalist list
it's pretty crowded in there right now so i wish you luck
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i love dark poetry, this is dark and brilliant.
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thank you im glad you enjoyed the read : )
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Jesus, very dark, and very poetic, the first lines really draw you in and the ending is completely unexpected,
well done indeed and good luck to you,
Alex.
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cheers Alex
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sssaaawwweeettttt!!! love the poem, and pic, they really go well together, you did an awesome job, and good luck in the contest =)
stephanie.
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thanks steph : )
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