It's been awhile
since we've talked.
Do you wonder
if I'm ok?
I'm not.
You broke my trust
and my spirit
when you left.
You lost faith in me.
I lost faith in me too.
I wish
I hated you.
But I don't.
I just miss you.
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Not finished, just jotting shit down. i dunno about a title either.
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Hmmm... I think I like the title and it seems fine to me the way it is. it says so much with only a few words. I think I would leave it just the way it is. I enjoyed the powerful emotion
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I wish I hated you
But I don't.
I just miss you.
How I've seen that in myself. This is a poem a lot of people can identify with. It carries a great deal of meaning.
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Since I wrote this I learned some things about this person, that made me miss them a little less. They were hard things to learn, but I am starting to be glad I no longer have a relationship with them.
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brilliant!
i know just how you feel.
" to think i might not see those eyes
makes it so hard not to cry" Run - Snow Patrol
I thought that would compliment your situation
Great write!
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