Essence of silver;
shimmering-
a light within the darkness.
Outlines of purity,
heart and soul;
sweep cobwebs of grey
into brilliance.
One hand-picked gem,
touched with care;
precision.
Glowing
in life's moments.
No treasure chest is needed;
I'll take my one
glorious diamond...
and hold it close to my heart.
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Hood-Winked
Sorry it took me some time to comment~
Beautiful piece You have penned and Love the emotions brought forth along with images of this Gem
Gorgeous and Priceless
Marvelous lines~
Outlines of purity,
heart and soul;
sweep cobwebs of grey
into brilliance.
You have also been Hood-Winked by The Poetic Bandits
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Voice~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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What wonderful imagery!! Diamonds are not one of my favorites but you have captured the escense and beauty. I am praying for your Mom too. I hope being Hood-Winked will bring a smile too your face if only for a brief moment. Love Theresa
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HOODWINKED!!!!
you are being ambushed by the poetic bandits! i love your words but especially the last stanza:
"No treasure chest is needed;
I'll take my one
glorious diamond...
and hold it close to my heart."
how sweet is that!!!! i love it!! thank you for sharing this. keep writing! God bless you always
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Thank you so much, appreciate your words.
Storm
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Hoodwinked
What a wonderfully written poem and I especially like the last stanza. Very beautiful, reminds me of something i wrote about a diamond. Great job with this piece keep it up.
Always write from the heart
never give up
Kate
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Thank you for your comments, much appreciate it.
Storm
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Hoodwinked
Beautifully worded, carefully thought out and chosen verses.Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece and good luck
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Thank you for the comments, I really appreciate it.
Storm
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HOODWINKED!
Sometimes the most perfect gems come in the most unobvious markings, but for those of us willing to look beneath the surface we are blessed to see those diamond in the rough.
You have just been ambushed by a member of the Poetic Bandits (hi hun!) and we want you to know that we banding together to support you during this most difficult time. I personally wish to tell you that my prayers are with you and for your mother dear. God Bless, Suzi
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Thank you, I really appreciate the comments.
Storm
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