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do you feel safe there? how unfortunate.

i scratched it all
= on this side =
of my closed eyes.

closed--but
    {w a n d e r i n g}
all the same.

i'm spiralling!
my body is spinning!
    (dizzy.)
  (very dizzy!)
in this blackness.

...am i dancing?...

and i'm dancing in awe of [Y]ou.
    - and i'm dancing all the same. -

~
          oh beloved:
              _burn_ my [comfort zone]™.
~

                                                      my [comfort zone]?--perished a long time ago;
                                                        ` our strength is in [Y]our resurrection.

we are~

*  && would i say that i love [H]im?  *
  *  but i learn to love my enemies.  *

no more hate...
    finding a new place.

    and maybe i'm scared.
{but it's all better.                          ^ faith † trust ^}

then finally i let go--and try to fly to [Y]ou--
    - and i'm dancing in [Y]our name. -
and i'm dancing in awe of [Y]ou.
    - and i'm dancing all the same. -

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  • DecemberBLUE07
    February 25, 2008
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    How fantastic.

    Absolutely awesome poem, favorited indeed!