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smile... haiku

turned up lips
momentum building
a smile

dee garner
© february 10, 2008

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  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    March 26, 2008

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    Truthful and deep

    Never a truer word written. Such truth and power within these words. A smile costs nothing at all, and can be priceless to those that need it.

    Love
    Wayne Leon


  • J aime Coudre silver member
    February 27, 2008

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    Nice, some day will learn how to do this style...first I have to learn how to sspell and say it...then will try writing it...


  • individuality gold member
    February 26, 2008

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    it is a little bit early for me right now but i will give it a go i think a good smiling poem

  • Just4u
    February 25, 2008

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    I just might have one of these in about 30 days

    Spring IS coming...

    Hugs...Eddy


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    February 25, 2008

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    Catz this is cute, funny and well put into form!
    You missed a good haiku contest! but will have more! thanks for sharing and starting the day out just right!
    Moons


  • Yemassee gold member
    February 25, 2008

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    I will not smile! I will not smile! I will not....darn I smiled! It's cute!...sometimes it takes momentum for me to smile...sometimes it takes mortar and brick to paste one on my face.. It's sort of how the haiku hits the reader, the first line then the buildup, the the third line---we smile.


  • Manoj Sanyal
    February 25, 2008

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    Alas! I have dental cavity.

    manoj

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