I've just realized something
Just burst through a rock
Learned a new chord
No need to be taught
I love you is great
Happiness follows
But the only time I'm in bliss
Is when you are happy
That is the true love
A contest entry
- Life Is Beautiful. [Eight Options.] by La Tua Cantante.
545 points, ended March 12, 2008, 29 entries
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This is very short and swwt. I enjoyed reading it a lot.
Thank you for entering my contest.
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This is a sweet write just not what we are looking for in the book, thank you for the entry and please feel free to read the examples on the front of the contest page and try again, thank you.
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ok life sucks. I wrote a really good reply and my computer went and zoned so now it is lost. if you would like to hear the speech I had prepared, ask me and I will tell gladly. good poem. mushy but good
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tell MEH
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sledding....right. haha perfect snowballs! haha that sounded wierder than i meant it to be. haha.
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lol this has nothin 2 do with the poem
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