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Will you be my paint thinner?


 
Paint stained catastophe;
conceals her heart -
masking the bloodless expression
on her face.



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  • Naridill
    February 25

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    Very well tainted, fluent imagery that is beautifully weaved through out. Phrasing is intriguing.
    Thanks for entering,

  • Hekate gold member
    February 25

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    I really like this piece, it's deep and very thought provoking. Well done and the best of luck in the contest


  • Grimoire
    February 24

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    I like it. I would have wrote "bloodthirsty" intsead of "bloodless".... but that is just me. I am twisted, I admit it. good luck.

    until immolation,
    Grimoire

    • volcaniclastic
      February 24
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      I could see bloodthirsty working - I somewhat imagined her trying to use the paint to cover up her emotions (or lack thereof)

      Maybe I threw a little personal in there with the title. Hmm.