Holding the knife to flesh,
The beauty of life flashed,
Shrivelling as the thoughts of you,
Climb
Through
My
Mind.
Wishing we would meet,
The future seems bleak for us,
Showered in wishes and dreams,
The night reigns as the rope entwines,
Around my neck for one last attempt.
Bleeding blood of love,
Crying as you forgot i exist,
Reality hit back hard,
Burdened
In
Disappointment
Reflecting an image that doesnt seem me,
I made my mistake pushing you from underneath,
Covering up feelings I died inside,
Thoughts only surround you,
I think you know who you are,
Just remember this,
I'm shining through death,
Only because I love you.
Author notes
the flow is way out i know, i guess i was trying to say something dw. I guess its my fault
A contest entry
- Love- Anything goes by Rachel21.
700 points, ended March 8, 2008, 14 entries
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thanks for the comment on my poem and your is very good too its short and its to the point as well -
My god.....
Tears
Thats all i can say really, besides this is an excelent(cant spell
) poem. The flow was acctually pretty good for me. I loved it. Wish i could give more than three applauses.
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aye i wrote this ages ago! i cant even remember what its about im such a tool
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i did enjoy this, good luck
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