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Unspoken Devotion

Honor isnt just a word,
that we should just shout out.
Its something that should be reserved,
for those who truly earn it.
Most of us today,
will honor those that fight.
But some don't have the means,
to tell the world they care.
As a proud american,
I fell I stand for something.
I wave my flag and shed my tears,
For those who fight for freedom.
They are the true heros.
I am proud to say.
I will stand up tall and proud,
when any of them walk my way.
For those of us who can't use words,
to express our love and devotion.
We will sit and wag our tails,
for all that our heros have given.

Author notes

I really liked this contest. I have a golden retriever myself and I feel that there is so much behind the eyes of a dog or most any pet that is unspoken.

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  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    March 19, 2008

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    An excellent and heartfelt composition--Very well written & Versed--Congratulations on the HM


  • GentleStorm
    February 25, 2008

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    aww. you wrote in the proud words of a dog. thank you so much. good luck in the contest, and give your goldie an extra treat for me


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    February 25, 2008

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    this is an amazing write auntie youre words made me stop and think and your words made me smile. this is perfect and really says alot well done


  • jcat gold member
    February 24, 2008

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    This was GREAT!!!! I loved it....actually made me smile!! I can just see Rodney waiting and wagging his tail in anticipation for his friend to walk back through those doors!!! Wonderful job and best of luck


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    February 24, 2008
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    A Proud Statement

    Yes--I wish more people shared your opinion!!
    Well written and versed and best of luck to you in the contest!

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