You touch me
Not with your hand but your heart
You touch me
Your words make me sing like a lark
I could never express
In words or dreams
The passion you've exposed
In the words you share
The beat the rhythm
The softness of your breath
God you make me melt
My Muse my Beautiful You
Author notes
I would love to lie here and tell you that their was just one muse in my life, ut there has been so many on this site and in my life, From my Children to so many friends that pulled me through Iraq, Thanks so much to all of you, and know I never lied about those that truely touch me.
Please tell me what you think
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very good
i liked it a lot,it is so sweet.such compassion you are a good writer. -
Like Very Fine Wine...
This beautiful poem expresses quite eloquently your appreciation for a special someone. Thank you for sharing with all of us your heart-and-soul-felt masterpeice. I really enjoy your work, Charlie!!!! 
Take care 
Peace, Cyn
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Oh. This is a nice little poem that you have written in here. I thought it did show a lot of affection and good will and could be a poem about a lot of different people. I'm sure they would all appreciate your kind words and feelings. Such nice thoughts. You did a good job of expressing yourself better.
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Lovely and Heartfelt
Wow Chatlie, your words are so very heartfelt and full of emotion as is your authors comments. I do remember out wonderful chats on yahoo when you were over there. I hope in some way it made your stay there a little easier. I remember the day you got back to the states, I was so relieved to hear from you. You were finally home safe and sound on your way to see your kids. You are are a wonderful friend and I always be here when ever you need a friend. You just give a hoot and a hollar dear friend.
You take care, Sandy
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I know I have commented on this already but I wanted to come back to give it justication. I was pressed for time yesterday.. This is such a beautiful and tender write so full of appreciation of all the those that touch our lives in some way. While lately I haven't been able to get my thougths together to produce much...your words reminded me of all the things in my life that are precious. I am truly thankful that you are home safe from Iraq..if anyone ever says that God doesn't listen and answer prayers..(even myself) your safe return is a prayer answered. I wanted to tell you also that I am glad I was able to be part of those who touched you while you were there..it has been a pleasure. I know you don't think of yourself as one..but your are still my Angel.
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lovely
charlie this is a very lovey poem well written and so full of truth , i hope that i was a help while you were there ,again thank you for being there for our troops who needed encouragement and praise have a great day my friend mary
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Wonderfully done.
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awwe this is truly a beautiful write! I like the way you lead the reader to think this is about a love..then at the end we find its about your love for your muse. brilliant writing!!
We are all very happy that you made it home safely from Iraq!!
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