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[ Do you ever wake up ]

Do you ever wake up
and pray that today doesn’t mess up?
you ever want to ask
hey world could you not give such a hard task?
Maybe a little less crime and a little less hate
this tortured world will always discriminate
to those who are different to those who want change
government is just scared of the chance of range
world lets make today better, give the helpless hope
we die by our own hands we don't die from the dope
let the uneasy chill
not have to struggle up that hill
lets all hold hands
maybe one day others will understand.

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  • Stratocaster9119
    April 10, 2008

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    This poem is everything.
    I can't even describe how much you just gained my respect.
    I'm in awe.
    You're an amazing writer.


  • forgottENtragEdy
    March 3, 2008
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    damn girl u got it goin on! haha i luv readin ur poetry...ur an awesome writer