Turn your back on what you have become,
No longer shall you breathe for anyone but yourself.
Plunge into the deep, the unknown
For here the everlasting euphoria persists.
No longer shall you breathe for anyone but yourself.
Never turn back to what they made you,
You'll never fit in there again.
Once you're gone, you're gone.
No longer shall you breathe for anyone but yourself.
Treat them like they treated you,
Fuck them over, just as they have done.
Turn their lives inside out,
Just don't give in to their screams.
No longer shall you breathe for anyone but yourself.
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Option #2, Pic #2
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very good, the repetitiveness is a bit annoying, but also adds to it prehaps you should have made it longer with more in between the repeated line. Good Luck.
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No longer shallyou breathe for anyone but yourself, oh that it was possible. Great write
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