I know how this feels
and i wouldn't wish it on anyone
i'm sorry you're going through this
i wish there was something someone could have done.
And I know it seem like the end
but you can't let her win and give up
you seem so much better
then to let her control you through the hurt.
There are other people out that
I know that would kill to be with you
but you have to believe in yourself
take a breath and convince yourself you can pull through.
because if she treats you like that
you don't need her as a friend
and i know its hard to let her go
but it's better in the end.
so please don't loose your belief in love
hold on to that for all time
and once your broken heart is mended
i promise you'll find another to call mine.
A contest entry
- Give me reason for hope by riley.
420 points, ended March 9, 2008, 5 entries
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Comments
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"so please don't loose your belief in love"
I think you meant lose here, loose is also a word, but doesn't really make sense in this context.
"i promise you'll find another to call mine."
I don't even doubt that, I just don't think I'll want that when I do find it. I don't think it'll be worth the effort because I've gotten to the point that I'm pretty much convinced that it wouldn't last next time either.
Thanks for entering, and good luck.
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