As the evening sun was setting low ,
I thought i would stop and take a look before i go.
I stopped beside a babbling brook
I'm so glad i took a look
I watch the brook run over the moss covered rocks
The sun is getting low
Soon it will be six o'clock
Time is flowing fast
This beautiful sunset will not last
Slowly it settles in its nest
The golden sunsets in the west
This is the picture i like best
Author notes
picture nature3jpg this is what i seen at the setting of the sun if this is not what you want then be more specfic you said you were open and would not judge unfairly .
A contest entry
- Nature Themed Pic Contest by liduen.
600 points, ended March 1, 2008, 5 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I love this piece!!!! My favorite part is:
"This beautiful sunset will not last
Slowly it settles in its nest "
Thank you for sharing this piece with us!!!!
I returned to read this piece again I loved it just that much! -
This is such a beautiful write. I can see the picture painted so perfectly in my mind, as if I'm standing there seeing it all happen and watching the time go by.
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BEAUTIFUL!!!!
The only thing that comes close to a sunset is a sunrise. I am an early morning person and to watch a sunrise starts my day off beautifully.
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Simply beautiful
This is a beautiful Kodak moment you've captured with your words that flow like a gentle breeze playing rhythmic melodies... great write made it a great read... simple words created a masterpiece... thanks for sharing the beauty... worthy of shiny trophy... take care Minoo
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this is really pretty well done on the trophy
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You truly deserved to win this contest.... Your description of the picture was so vivid that I knew before taking a look exactly what I would see in the prompt pic.........
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SO, SO LOVELY!!!
This is indeed a perfect ending to a perfect day!
's I know to me there is nothing more beautiful than a sunset or a sunrise.
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Either you didn't read the instructions or you simply forgot. I am not even reading this poem until you read the rules more carefully. I'm not trying the be mean, only strict. Sorry, I've already had to tell someone this today so its getting kind of annoying. you have 2 days.
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that is exactly what I wanted! I just meant that in the rules it said that you should put the picture number and "the most beautiful thing in the world is nature" in your authors notes. I'm sorry I was so nasty, I was in a really bad mood. My apologies. This really is a beautiful poem that captures the beauty of nature very well. Good luck in the contest.
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very pretty Mary.. you have captured one of natures most beautiful moment. Good luck in the contest.
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