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Guard Tower Diplomacy

Guard Tower Diplomacy,
is that what we need?
to heal the wounds of sovereignty,
of infected borders that bleed.

Shoot them all on sight,
as they cross the Rio Grande,
electrified fences,
sure, that's a good plan.

Let's let them in,
they make a good work force,
Give them Social Security,
and charge no Tax of course.

Give them all the benefit's,
America has to offer,
They'll send it all back home,
until they've emptied the U.S. coffer.

Or how about this?
I have a plan that's great,
we'll annex Mexico,
as the 51st state.

Until debate has ended,
this one thing's for sure,
there is no perfect answer,
there is no miracle cure.

They need to all go home,
and come back legally,
don't disrespect my laws,
don't think the milk is free,

Living here is a right,
for a freedom all have yearned,
living here is a privilege,
that daily must be earned.





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  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    April 21, 2008

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    Right On!!!!

    Yeah! Send this to the President! I'm not kidding! Don't know what all this craziness is about but I do know that something has to be done. Thanks for this & for expressing what many don't want to! I'm a grandchild of immigrants that came here legally & worked their tails off to contribute to this country in the way that the USA provided for those who seek admission honorably! Yup...let's hold people to account for what they do! What on earth is this country coming to? Bravo Mark! 4 U!


  • storiesuntold gold member
    April 1, 2008

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    Amen

    I have many friends of all colors white brown black and we all work hard to have what we have . But the few that just draws welfare and from what I have seen today well Im fed up whan I have to work while they play . Lets take a count and do it right .Once they were the minority and they had the right .But looky here what we have today its time we changed places Id say .


  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    March 18, 2008
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    Right On!

    We're in agreement once again Mark! Send this to all America's newspapers if there not afraid of dealing with the truth. :-) 51st. State? LOL...don't think Mexico would like that, though they should. We're already supporting their Gov't with all the illegals here & all the drug trade! Personally I think this is all another Conspiracy to undermine the USA. Ugh...massive red tape, plunder, lies, scandals...I could go into a major rant here. I'll spare you. Sure hope this one got you a trophy you can display over your mantel! Hee hee. Not the furry ones with antlers! Yuck yuck...

  • xXblackenedXroseXx
    March 9, 2008

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    This was a good poem.. the first stanza didn't have the best flow but I think the rest of the poem went quite smoothly. I must say I disagree though.. of course not condoning illegal immigration because it is breaking a law. But I think the illegal immigrants here now should be allowed to stay here now and apply for citizenship.. also I think the process to gain citizenship should be reformed so it's not so lengthy and expensive. You did speak truth though when you said there is no solution to this problem.


  • Exit-Stage-Right
    March 8, 2008
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    Well said. It's simply amazing that so many Americans can just sit on their mouths and not say anything as this huge parade is marching past their homes. Simply unbelievable.


  • Shakespeare
    March 3, 2008

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    absolutely correct! I agree, we are a free country, but due process should be sought to gain entrance. Wonderful point and topic focused on!


  • nitefire
    March 3, 2008

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    I think that issue raised here is now becoming obsolete with the slow introduction of the NAU or North American Union. There is a super hwy being constructed that goes from Mexico through the US into Canada. I personally believe that in the distant (or not so distant) future there may be a merging of the European Union and this North American Union to create the beginning of what some call the New World Order. The symbolism of a secret measure of control operating out of the US is rampant in our contemporary world although we are too blind to see it as a whole.


    • Exit-Stage-Right
      March 8, 2008

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      WOW!

      Good to see someone in A.P. who actually knows about the N.A.U. and S.P.P., etc.! Fortunately, several states are throwing up roadblocks to this superhighway. A lot of people are taking a second look. CNN, usually a very liberal news outlet, even took a stance against the superhighway. I pretty near fell out of my chair when I saw Lou Dobbs reaching out to Jack McManus of the John Birch Society to get his input. The Birchers have been fighting all manner of these sinister schemes since the '60's!


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    February 28, 2008

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    Its no different here in the UK!
    I so agree with all that you say Mark.
    Our little Island is over run.
    As my children grow they have little prospects of finding something as simple as their own home,.
    Benefits is a laugh! a joke, especially us so called UK Nationals, who get little compared to those who enter in
    from other walks of life.
    Its all a cover up!
    Julie x


  • secberm
    February 24, 2008

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    Yes brother! Well executed... Pun intended. LOL Then again, more than half our politicans are criminals. And all our businessmen. Good luck.

    Dez


  • paulcreates silver member
    February 24, 2008
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    You got it!

    YES! ^5 Ram
    Right ARM!

    Paul


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    February 24, 2008
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    HAHA This is great Good luck with it in the contest

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