Asleep in the sand for thousands of years
Content in your arms I feel no fear
Let the earth continue to turn
It’s for your caress that I still yearn
Wrapped up tight as bones turn to dust
Loving you darling is simply a must
Forever and a day I’ll be with you
The only man that made dreams come true
Held by you until the universe ceases to be
Next to my heart you’ll lie with me
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A contest entry
- Another Picture Inspired by delightfulmess.
450 points, ended February 25, 2008, 15 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Comments
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Oh wow, I can definitly relate to this.
Marvelous job, I love the emotions put into this piece. They seep off every line.
Bravo
♥ Kate -
What a joy to read.This is a great poem and I love the ryming scheme.Great job and good luck in the contest.
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Love the picture that you put with it, this whole write describes real true love, it really does. great write, good luck and thanks for entering
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awesome write. love is a difficult concept and i yet have found anyone. the skeletons in the picture are lucky.
thanks for sharing and good luck.
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I really like this, and it fits with the picture amazingly. thanks for sharing
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Ahh I love the eternal love sort of thing. That's what the real love is, none of that "I love you" crap after three months of knowing each other. Very nice flow throughout this write.
Thanks for entering this and good luck!
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Sis a double silver
I remembered this the first time around and thought your words were fantastic
Juliex -
Okay I don't care if it won two silver. But I loved the poem, this is a great joy to read.
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So beautiful and what a wonderful picture to be inspired by, well done on your two previous silver. Well done and best to you
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A very nice write thank you for your entry,
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i like how you expresses unconditional and timeless love here. the rhyme scheme was well done....soft and soothing.
thanks for sharing and keep writing.
HENSLEY
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Dont know where you found that pic but it tells the same story of your poem without words! All your poems are unique and the messages of these shorter poems are greater than many longer poems I have read.
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I really liked this one. "Content in your arms' let the earth continue to turn" - very nice.
Marlene -
i remember seeing that picture awhile back, it is a good prompt to write from and you have done a great poem - thanks for entering
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A desrved silver
Another unique take on love. Death's gentle caress extending into the beyond. Love should transcend all. Nice way to start my morning. Thanks for sharing. I pray for your family. The preciousness of life and love transforms us into much more than we used to be.
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WOW well done. Love it
Thank you for you entry in my contest.
Delila
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lovely
Wonderfully written. Great take on the prompt and such a love filled write. Good luck in the contest Di
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this is wonderful and the picture makes me so sad, when I was younger two of our friends were missing for a few weeks, they were later found in the ohio river drown in their car holding hands. good luck in the contest it is a very good write
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A Wonderfully imaginative and romantic poem you have penned here. A fanatastic take of the prompt. You were right on with this one!
Good Luck in the Contest!
David
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Excellent take of the prompt Dear I saw one from this contest the other day Good luck with yours.
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Beautiful
Such a loving and caring write
The thoughts of them united forever is simply amazing
I so admire the way you have portrayed this poem
Wonderful
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Your words go with the picture perfectly. Great job. Good luck in the contest. I think it is an awesome write.
Kelli
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