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warm blankets

A white blanket tickles my face.       
I hide.
with wide eyed holes it  grows wider.
fingers poke through.
Im seeing everything.
my life through a tunnel.
My babies arms.
A smell.
my wife.
her charms.




She sees a glare.
a stare through a peripheral.
Black holes.
It all disappears.
Becomes clear


she's the one that tosses aside
My blankets,
My Insecurities.



Shes brings them to me.
My purity.
Purities.

(She covers them with a warm blanket)

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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    February 24, 2008

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    This is so eloquent and beautiful. Such a personal and emotional write, beautiful!!!


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    whisper