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Boots

Over the dry and dusty earth
They marched quick-time,
Their thousand boots
Pounding in their mastery.

And then the rains
Did turn the land to slime,
And turned the men to
Curse the binding frippery.

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  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    May 11, 2008
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    Awesome!

    You've done a great job with a very creative & original piece!!