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Broken

That’s it I’ve had it
No more reason
To be happy
To love
To feel
Broken is what I am
I’ve had it
Of wondering
Of dreaming
Of thinking
Broken is what I am
I’ve had it
Of staying here
Being good
Being me
Broken is what I am
I want to
Runaway
Flyaway
Leave
Broken is what I am
I want to
Scream
Cry
Die
Broken is what I am
I want people to
Leave me alone
Go away
Stop trying to change me
Broken is what I am
I need to
Leave behind my life
Forget who I am
Broken is what I am
Dear friends there is nothing
You can do
No one can help
No one cares
Broken is what I am
Nothing will happen
Nothing will change
No one gets it
Broken is what I am
It’s what I’ll be
It’s what I am

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  • tsarina
    February 26, 2008

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    Wow, leigh! I really like this, this is REALLY good. i like how it's so simple, it gives a lot of feeling. poems like that are really good. I'm giving you three clappy men for your coolness!
    ♥ tsarina ♥

    • tsarina
      February 26, 2008
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      ps. FEEL BETTER. I agree with everything everyone else says (below) and don't get all angsty on us! I like my friends to be happy!


  • LuckyBlackCat
    February 24, 2008
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    leigh, call me if you need to, please... we all care about you....and DON'T TELL US WE CAN'T DO ANYTHING... i feel you are underestimating all of us (the peeps that have commented so far) i have a feelling about what is wrong....i'll talk 2 u tomorrow.


    • TwilightWolf
      February 24, 2008
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      Well I'm not always happy. I feel as though I have died inside and Im not coming back. It SUCKS. SO I CANT ALWAYS BE A LITTLE RAY OF PURE HAPPY SUNSHINE!!!


  • my02U
    February 24, 2008

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    I CARE! I CARE VERY MUCH! SO THERE! DEAL WITH IT! I AM NOT LEAVING U BY URSELF IF U R GOING TO BE LIKE THAT! LILS IS WATCHING U!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


  • StarIlluminated
    February 24, 2008
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    Awwwww Leigh
    I agree with Heart: "you can't tell me that there's nothing I can do about it"
    If you need to call me and sob for hours and hours and hours over the phone then what the heck my parents can pay the phone bill.

    xoxoxoxoxoxo please feel better I hate seeing you this way!
    *KT*


  • DeadlyTurnip
    February 24, 2008

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    *crosses arms* stop it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Leigh I want you to be happy very much and you can't tell me that there's nothing I can do about it and you can't tell me I don't care

    Love you tons and I hope you is feeling better soon...


    • LuckyBlackCat
      February 24, 2008
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      i agree with heart... (i find that you are most often right in this subject matter)


      • DeadlyTurnip
        February 24, 2008
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        Hooray! You agree with me!! Yay!! Thank you Kathryn that means a lot! (Sorry, I had to. It's an honor )

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