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Playing With Normality

You 'oughta see how
good I am at pretending that I'm sane.
I practice in the mirror every day.

I study chatty questions
and most everything inane;
from the weather to the highest price of
hay.

I try to seem quite innocent,
it works almost every time;
I'm serious and studious and shy--

So when I show my colors,
(rainbow stripes, marroon, and lime)
It never fails to make my friends
surprised.

But these past few months
it seems they've taken everything in stride;
there's really no shock factor that I see...

Perhaps--a novel thought--
They've finally met what's kept inside;
perhaps they've figured out what makes
me.

Author notes

Catriona

Screen name: Aesca

I could be your loony (Sorry; I mean eccentric) relative who embarrasses you in public.

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  • wow this poem was really different than most I've read..but thats what made me fall in love with it!! Great work!!! Bravo and thanks for entering!!

    Melyssa

    and woot i have a looney!! haha love it


  • HopelessScribbles gold member
    February 24, 2008
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    very nice intake on this finish enjoyed the read, good luck..Moons


  • aboomer silver member
    February 24, 2008

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    Love your beginning on this! I can so relate...lol...
    full of good emotion. And depth - sometimes when we do practice, our friends do tend to notice who we are. Well said.
    thanks for your entry.
    best wishes.