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Satisfied?

I lay on the bed with my hands tied to the headboard.
My shirt lies in ribbons on the floor.
My bra is in half at the foot of the bed.
The only thing that is left on me are my edibles panties.
My nipples are covered with whip cream.
And there is a line of chocolate from my jugular down to my panties.
He laves up the whip cream and suckles my nipple, then the other ignoring my pleas to fill me.
I arch my back as he licks my nipple one final time.
I wrap my leg around his waist and press him down.
He just smiles at me with a wicked look in his eyes.
He slowly traces the chocolate down to the valley between my breasts.
He gets distracted and squeezes my nipple between his fingers.
He does the same to my other nipple leaving them both hard and taunt.
he continues his way down to my hip.
He starts to bite my hip and then licks the panties.
He eats a piece of them and looks at me to make sure i'm watching.
Slowly he eats the panties off of me.
I beg and he smiles.
He bites my thigh knowing that it makes me wet.
He bites my other thigh and I moan fo rhim.
I feel his finger slowly making it's way up the inside of my thigh.
He runs it over my cleft following it with his tongue.
My eyes close and I bring my hips up to his mouth for more.
But nothing happens.
He says, "Open your eyes or we stop!"
My eyes open wide imploring him not to stop and he
says, "Good girl."
He grabs my hips to hold them still.
His tongue licks my clit making me pant.
I beg for him to come in me, but he refuses.
While his tongue is busy licking my juice, his finger
is probing me with the same intensity.
Both his finger and tongue start to probe me
with the same rythem.
I can feel him smile because he knows I'm going to climax.
With one final thrust of his finger I scream his name.
He licks me dry, then puts his finger to my lips.
I open them and suck his finger, tasting myself.
He looks at me and says, "You have been a good girl and now I will give you your reward."
He unties me, but before I can get my arms around his neck
he flips me over on my stomache and reties my hands together.
I get on all four and behind me I can hear him
taking his clothes off.
He comes up behind me and leans over me so he can whisper in my ear.
I can feel how big and hard he is.
I puch my butt against his groin and he wastes no time in filling me.
I scream out in pure pleasure.
He pulls out of me until only the head of his cock is in me and them thrusts into me again down to the hilt.
He pulls out of me again, but instead of waiting for him I push myself against him.
He leans over me and says, "A little impatient aren't you?"
I turn my head and give him a look that says, 'Yes I am. Now fuck me.'
I turn my head around again and smile as he starts to pump into me harder.
As he and I are about to go over he puts his mouth on my neck.
He pumps one more time and we go into oblivion and I feel him bite me on my neck.
I collapse onto the bed andhe falls on me.
He rolls over onto his side and unties my hands.
As I look into his eyes I say, "You are never satisfied, are you?"
He pulls me ontop of him and holds me close as we both drift asleep.

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Comments

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  • SugarCandyKittyKat
    February 27, 2008

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    A few spelling errors,but damn!!!

    I suddenly got hot now

    What a write!!! Totally mind-blowing...sigh...

  • Demonica
    February 27, 2008
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    yeah nobody ever thought i was that much of a freak or that kinky. lol. i'm happy i could make u speechless. lol. i'm glad you loved it.

  • SexySerenity
    February 25, 2008
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    kinky.demanding.exciting.awesome write!


    • Demonica
      February 25, 2008
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      thank u for the comment and i'm glad u thought so. it was my first erotic poem/story.

  • xXxcutter4-everxXx
    February 25, 2008

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    wow

    that is an excellent write. it had me from start to finish. probably the best erotic story i've read yet.
    very nice.


    • Demonica
      February 25, 2008
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      thank you for the comment. glad u liked it.
  • sulee
    February 24, 2008
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    That is exactly how I am feeling. One day he will understan

  • ScArLeM
    February 24, 2008
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    wow talk about exiting


    • Demonica
      February 24, 2008
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      what can i say. i get excited and when i do, i get kind of kinky. lol.

  • HaileeDear
    February 24, 2008

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    This was hot! Got me going from the first line to the end. I really loved the ending, it ended a dirty session cute, being in each others arms. Great piece. OW OW!

    xoxo
    pixie

    • Demonica
      February 24, 2008
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      thank you the comment. my first erotic poem/story. glad you liked it.
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