Help the blind man to see
Help the deaf man to hear
Help the dumb man to talk
And the phobic not to fear
Help the young children listen
And the old ones to withstand
Keep the rich man aware
And I'll show you what I can
Author notes
This is a little song I've been hummin to meself, inspired by iamthebeatles' contest (which is probably closed by now) heh.
I hope you like!
What do you think?
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oops, I forgot clappie guys (I love the little clappie guys)
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yeah! Another not depressing poem! I like the line "And the phobic not to fear" Whats the tune to this song? Is it made up or based of off something?
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kewl
I like the "phobic not to fear," that makes the rhyming ingenious! (spelin @.@)
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Aw, sweet song Heart! Very good message, luvs it!
*KT*
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excellent
Very nice. You certainly were inspired; I find this deep and touching. Lots of luck to you in the contest.
Brian
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hmmmm
interesting... i like the whole thing but if i have to choose my fav part id say its the first stanza: Help the blind man to see
Help the deaf man to hear
Help the dumb man to talk
And the phobic not to fear
it introduces the main ideas well.
i enjoyed the slant rhyme at the end: withstand, can
u will have to sing it to me tomorrow!!
2 clappie dudes!
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MUAHAHAHA! You shouldn't have asked. I shall be singing it all day tomorrow, don't you worry.
Glad you liked, and thanks (yet again) for los dudes de clappies!
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