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Anticipation

I'm
Counting the steps
To
The door of your heart

And

I can't wait

And

I think I have the key.

do you like it? i hope you do. it took me HOURS to write it properly.

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  • liduen silver member
    February 25, 2008
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    I love short and sweet poems. You spent those hours well. Awesome poem.


  • Arizona Sunset
    February 24, 2008
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    awww simple and sweet....I love the thoughts of this anticipation! ~blessings always~ Trisha