When you are sick
we want you to get better
we want to show a little love
So you will not lose hope
When you are sick
we are praying for you
we all want to show a little love
to help you now
When you are sick
we cross our fingers
close our eyes
and wish upon a star for you
So don't give up
because with all of us
praying for you
God will have no choice but to answer our prayers
Author notes
"I XxlostxinxpainxX , hereby allow Mackerth to use my poem for the intended purpose"
and I don't want pionts even if you want to use my poem use it, and I am praying for him to get better
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A contest entry
- Sick Young Boy Needs a Poem! by mackereth.
2500 points, ended March 31, 2008, 41 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Tell me your first impression . . .
Comments
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This piece is beautiful and has great intentions. I hope that he feels better, for your poetry probably warmed his heart. Keep up the great work!
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First of all i would like to thank you for entering my contest. Just by doing so you are giving hope to everyone that this has affected. This is an amazing poem, and a great opening poem for the booklet i want to make! I really liked the addition of religion, but without making it sound too religious, if that makes any sense. Thanks again, and good luck in the contest!
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awwwww baby gurl you have a heart of gold and your words capture so much happiness and friendliness in them.well done beautiful
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