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cheating heart

everybody said he liked her
and i wasn't blind to see
i could see how he treated her
and how he treated me

but the problem was she liked him
it was obvious to me
nobody believed me
they all liked her to much
but i could see inside her cheating heart
that see loved him to much

she had a serious boyfriend
in a different school
i really want to tell me
about his cheating girl

everyday when i walk into class
and see them flirting there
anger rises inside of me
as i walk by without a single stare

but the secret was i liked him
so very much
i only told her
that he was my secret crush

she stabbed me in the back
some best friend you see
who dare she do such a thing
she said she loved me

so tonight i'm going to tell me
to find a different girl
cause the one you love so much
as another boy

i know that she will hate me
but i don't really care
i hope that all her so called friends
will turn behind her back
without a single care

it serves her right
to be like this
to have no one
expect for him

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  • Fey Absinthe
    March 10, 2008
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    I like this. very schoolgirl pov if you ask me and thats why I love it!

  • Fey Absinthe
    February 24, 2008
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    this fits the theme really well. I like it alot!

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