With a yearning to become more
We stand proud of others
Sharing knowledge and wisdom with all
Hoping that one day
Peace will be brought forward
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie Contest - 15 Poets, 25 words....Prompt Free by Amunet Wolfbane.
600 points, ended February 25, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Excellent, Wonderfully Expressed!
Filled with wisdom, and longing to have more.
I like this short, yet very potent piece.
Thanks for sharing brother, and all the best to you in the contest!
Peace, Timothy aka poeticweaver~
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Beautifully written. I like the whole concept of unity here and it is well written. I think we all do hope for peace but then again, we all have to find peace within to give it to the world.
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A yearning that most all seek...As we stand proud of others sharing all and hoping always for the day of peace...sighs...My Hetane your words are powerful and to the point.Well said!..Niaish for being you
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Oh I love this! That is my hope as well. It would behoove us to seriously consider being help to one another. In times like these, your words are most profound. I love the art! The best to you in the Comp.
Much Love ♥
Renee
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Interesting work here!
Well done and wonderful
imagery as well. Good
luck to you with this one!
Jeremy0826 -
Excellent poem, fantastic usage of words, good luck in the contest
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