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Bloomed Doom

Can you possibly be re-born
when there is so much at stake
all the past behind you
and the blame for your mistakes

How can one try to forget
the tragedy that once ovewhelmed
though now with it said and done
it's still a living hell

Can people learn to accept
that the past is dead and gone
that we won't repeat our mistakes
but learn and move on

How can you get close to those
who don't have an ounce of grace
spending life constantly moving
running from your mistakes

It's a fate worse than death
that keeps us unaware
of those who have chosen to love
and have the time to spare

The day is now here
and you can no longer run
stand up to your weakness
to show the beauty you've become

Darkalesyse (tiff)

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  • LovesWithTheBreeze
    March 1, 2008
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    omg tiff i honestly think this is one of your best! I LOVE IT
    it was moving and it was very melodic, it flowed really great and the wording was perfect.
    This portrayed a very moving point and its so where Im at too right now....i love you babygirl....you are so talented!!