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Celestial Love

 

 stars.jpg stars image by hareeexxx

 

 

 

Her eyes sparkled like the stars

 

 

leaving me so enchanted

 

 

lost in distant galaxies

 

 

every heart beat

 

 

like asteroids colliding

 

 

deep into my very soul

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    February 25, 2008

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    A lovely piece. I've fallen into myseterious eyes one too many times in life But I see the allure of them only too well. Great job on this piece.


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    February 24, 2008

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    Wonderful take on the prompt Dear Great Write. I wish you the best with your poem in the contest. Cara


  • poetryality silver member
    February 24, 2008

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    Loved the imagery and the feel of zest! Beautiful work poet. I am left exhilarated! I wish you the best in the Comp.


    Much Love ♥

    Renee


  • Silent Cougar Moderators member
    February 24, 2008

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    ah, sucking up to the judge eh, . A very sweet worded write all the same my friend, well done.


  • Entwining Beauty
    February 24, 2008

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    amazing poetry. Very beautiful images as you read simply beautiful good luck

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