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Bring to me your paper wings
I'll be the wind upon which you soar
Bring to me your tears of pain
I'll heal your soul once more

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    February 25, 2008

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    Short, but I like it. It weaves a great image in my mind and it has such a serene and honest feel about it that I realy can sink itno. Lovely job on this.


  • Margaret Denham gold member
    February 25, 2008

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    Beautifully written, sweetheart and the picture is wonderful...if her hair was a shade darker it would be eerie because her dress is the same colour as yours.

    Margaret


  • poetryality silver member
    February 24, 2008

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    How beautiful! Yes, there is power in the healing hand of good spirited people. We can fly if we wish you know. A very lifting work here poet. I wish you well in the Comp.


    Much Love ♥

    Renee


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    February 24, 2008

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    Beautiful work here!
    I love this picture that you found.
    You did a wonderful job bringing it
    to life through your words here!
    Well done and all the best to you
    with it in this contest!




    Jeremy0826


  • PerVirtuous
    February 24, 2008
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    Beautiful, like yiur soul.


  • Entwining Beauty
    February 24, 2008

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    Such a beautiful feeling when reading, excellent poem i enjoyed it very much good luck in the contest

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