Knots twist
beneath scars that itch
in agony.
Having allowed myself
to be played cruelly
like a pawn,
and I
am left feeling
regrettable...
again.
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie Contest - 15 Poets, 25 words....Prompt Free by Amunet Wolfbane.
600 points, ended February 25, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This really deserved the gold. So much heart in this... Bel
Your ending is superb! and grabbed my heart/ I can only say that I understand 
Love,
Mel
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Very very nice, I'm impressed with this one and obviously the judges were too as you won the gold trophy. Awesomely full of emotion.
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This one hits me on a pretty personal level to be honest. It cuts an old wound that I long thought healed, but it happens to us all huh?
An excellent piece of poetry 
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like the reference to the pawn
is a chess nut..lol...no pun intended
the first passage tugged at me
and I definately know the word Again...too well
take care of you sweet lady
best wishes
Peace and hugs
Muddy
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Great!
*regrettable with two t's, cruelly with two l's
Lovely poem! I especially like the shape and the font.
Good luck in the contest!
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Awww... No regrets sweetheart! The person who chose to play you is the one that should have regrets. I feel these words to heights unimaginable today for some reason. Yup! Been there! Let it go love! Karma will bite them in the ass if they mislead you.
Lots of emotion written here! I wish you the best in the Comp!
I LOVE YOU ♥
Mom
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clever metaphorical piece here, and knowing where it came from makes it even more so. well done you.
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very short
but very nice!!!
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