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Beyond the grave

Sitting down
my mother watches me
from beyond the grave.

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for char's contest

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  • HeavenScent4U
    February 29, 2008

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    this is so sadly beautiful very nice take on the image prompt be well and be very blessed i see char liked it


  • Lady Australis silver member
    February 25, 2008
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    beautiful


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    February 24, 2008

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    a deep and poetic piece which has a chilling effect to your words as I imaged the scene. hehe cant wait to see you tomoz fayeness...btw is howard closed...and did you hear what happened to the year 8 boy?


    • DarkStatic
      February 24, 2008
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      Thanks I'm in a rather depressing mood right now Yeah i can't wait to see you either.

      Weee howards closed!!! No lessons for me!

      Yeah I did poor guy...did you know he died saving his friend?

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