Computer glitches, gluttony reacts
traces of the Matrix informs the system to overload
override, the hard drive
demage within
features configure with deformity
informing me of seizures participating in each text that's typed
the system has ran a long course of tyrannical bowl movements
inside jobs darned by the insider
providing post tramatic stress towards the innocent
in a sense, we're doomed!
underground challenges, challenges the heinous crimes of hipococy
if underdeveloped minds cannot see, we must stand clear and speak clearity
for it is, inside the system where confusion has ran a muck
delusional adjustments, are just that
conformity bores me
stand up my people, allow nothing to surpress your thoughts, hopes and dreams
the system can be turned on its' ear, you have to be willing to fight
democracy for all!
all of a sudden, a thrust of power shakes the environment
darkness overtakes the myth of a coo
tramatic triumph occurs, but at what cost?
look inside the system,
can you relate...can you escape...the system, the system...
open your mind to a poet's thoughts
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my god
that system sure is something special...
Rose Cold murder
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thanks for your coment. if your not careful...the system can take you under...lol...i hope you enjoyed! come back anytime.
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"Let me out!"
Hey son, I love this piece. Lots of great concepts here. Kept me involved and raised my eyebrows throughout. Had nitty-gritty kinda questions and things/ideas some of us maybe wish we could avoid. This is a wonderful take on perspective and insider information (lol). Love the write. When you get back to this, hit the typos here and the piece will be even more powerful. Great job kid.
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well thank you kind sir...i tried to find something that was not only fresh in 'wordz' but in information as well. always nice to receive coments that make you think and rethink!
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Whoa!
This covers it all! The kids, the computers, and even government installations. This is what we've been telling the kids. My agent and I. This is a Great Piece Of Poetry with a huge message! "The System"
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i'm glad you enjoyed this piece...it's specail in a 'special' kind of way. the system can be quite tricky. if we are not careful "we" can be engulfed in all the madness.
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oh boy, that system sure is something, I really liked this piece and the depth it carried, nice nice job, very impressive on this one.....
-Love Layne
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ah ha!
so there really is a littlr dud messing with my p.c.
l.o.l.! good stuff here son!
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