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The raw rhythm of the pounding music
matches exactly the beat of your heart
As I lay across your glistening chest
touching the chain holding your arms apart

I relish the salty taste of your skin
While trail my tongue lightly up your thigh
I slow my journey as I feel your want
Loving the sound of your tortured sigh

I pass your passion on my way to your face
I straddle your chest again just to tease
A want to feel your lips between my teeth
Your need becomes something I want to appease

The music still grinding setting the mood
My hands are now shaking as I blindfold you
I can hear you moan and you cannot lie still
Straining at your bonds as your tears ensue

The kneading the biting you want this from me
I feel you lean into my nails on your chest
Your begging and screaming for something more
You need me to touch you to hold to caress

Your body on fire every muscle strung so tight
I try to be kind to soothe your bruised skin
Knowing what you need and wanting it too
As I softly caress the each place I had been


The music gets louder I cant wait any longer
sliding my body lower I slam into you
The sound that escapes you is loud and unclear
I cannot even listen I'm in heaven its true

Faster and faster as the music speeds up
each orgasm a detonation and we cannot stop
I scream at the feel of your violent explosion
fulfillment complete beside you I drop

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  • TheDemonEve
    March 24, 2008
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    Hot and sensual with sadism through the delivery of pleasure. This piece puts you on the edge of your seat, and you speed through it just to be disappointed that it ends, and then you go and read it again. Very well done.

    Best of luck and thanks for entering!


  • SexySerenity
    February 25, 2008
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    verry sexxy


  • fallingsky
    February 25, 2008

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    Damn

    talk about hot! This is just pure genious! I don't know how to describe it other than... Incredible! You are very talented! It put my sense into overload!


  • majik matt
    February 24, 2008
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    wow steamy

    that was ugh... intresting to say the least

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