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You never understood
the chord you struck,
play me again.

A contest entry

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  • individuality gold member
    March 13, 2008

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    i think of a song here by roy harper and the final powerchord of her last intake of breath... the plough i think it is called well actually it is not a song but a poem spoken on the album


  • aliceramone
    February 24, 2008

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    Wow!...some killer words here in such a short piece...a real bang!...congrats on the well deserved trophy!


  • NeverSayAddiction
    February 24, 2008
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    hmmm...

    so much with so little...very nice...


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    February 24, 2008

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    Interesting and beautifully
    thought out. Well done and
    good luck to you here!



    Jeremy0826


  • February Moon gold member
    February 24, 2008
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    Stunning.

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