watching him hang himself
he's unaware I gave him a rope
the noose already tied
cannot fix his confusion
I have far too much pride
I will miss him though
as he becomes one more memory
in a menagerie of ones I love
I will be alone as they fail tests
they have no knowledge of
Author notes
I create my own loneliness
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i am not seeing what option this is
please fix that before i sadly must DQ you
thank you!
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i'm sprry option 10
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short and sweet, well, sweet may not be the right word. i really injoyed reading this. its like you die, and i helped. it hurts you to know that you helped someone else die. i can completely relate. best of luck.
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yes! Thank you
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This is really sad. It's a good write though.
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I do applaud you, because at least you've acknowledged the fact that you do create your own loneliness, and now you can work on getting past it. I used to be hugely paranoid about a lot of things, and it's taken a lot to get past it, but the first step to getting past anything is to admit that it's a hindrance.
You have penned a wonderful piece here, full of imagery and metaphor, and those last two lines were especially potent. I look forward to reading more of your work, and welcome to AP!
Laura xxx
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I assume this "noose" is a metaphor for tripping other's up and pushing them away.
The author's note explains it all. Good write.
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eeeek!
a little to adult for me... im 13 and surprised this didn't get blocked. good write, tho.
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sorry about that.... Thank you for yoru comment though
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hmm..
i like this one
its great although it could use.:
Shut your mouth and listen.
There's no time for reminiscing,
Because thinking of the past just never changed a thing
well what do i know.its just my opinion
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Thank you for your thoughts, I appreciate the feedback.
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