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Fall Down

We all love to be loved

To be held high above

In eternal embrace

In your eternal embrace

Now finally i can breathe.


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Graveyardwalker

A contest entry

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  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    February 27, 2008

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    wow this is a beautiful piece and your words are so strong with strength and power in them. this is beautiful well done

  • MightyBoosh
    February 24, 2008
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    Changed my name, but i cant change it on authors notes (originally GraveYardWalker). MightyBoosh


  • Anguas-Confusion gold member
    February 24, 2008

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    Nicely done, this is quite a different approach to the prompt, well twisted and don tho. THank you for entering, best of luck to you. xxxx

    • MightyBoosh
      February 24, 2008
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      Thanks hun, i just felt like that and i came across the contest. I thought it was different, its still very much like a nursery rhyme though, and i stuck to the rhyme scheme of the nursery rhyme in question.
      Thanks again for reading xxx